To GG Readers,
A Very Rin-Centric Chapter. Picture of Rin being the Gorgeous Geek instead of Jin~
Okay. This chapter is long. I’m warning you. It’s long. That’s why it took me the whole weekend to finish it and even then I’m not satisfied with it. Chapter 67 is heavy on the emotion and overall, it makes me sad when rereading the Sound Episode 1 of the GG Drama. You’ll know why once Chapter 67 is done and over with. Since this week is mid-term week for me, I will not be able to get the next chapter done on time. I’m sorry but I guarantee the next couple of chapters won’t be delayed. And if I have to, I’ll try to type up three chapters for next next week. ^^ Thank you for your patience all my supporters~
For everyone who has Sound Episode stuff for me, please e-mail them to me. I won’t be able to go on MSN unless I have to. Later guys~
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Hello Minnie,
I know it’s midterm week (for me too) but you should go on MSN Minnie. I like to send you messages there. It’s quite a shame you didn’t get a round in on time with this post. No matter who Rin-chan is up against this round, she’ll most likely win thanks to this chapter. That’s my prediction anyway.
For such a long chapter, it didn’t feel long. It is most likely the lack of jumping back and forth between scenes. I don’t have much to say this time since I have to go finish my homework soon but this chapter is really climatic in the Rin half of the story. I saw the breakup coming from a mile away but you really surprised me Minnie. I did not imagine they’ll break up on those terms. I feel sorry for Kristian. I feel sorry for Rin-chan.
Will they get back together next chapter? Will they break up forever? If they do, what will Rin do in regards to Jordan? Oh. Jordan. You emotional friend you. I hate to say it but JoRin seems even less likely now that KrisRin broke up thanks to Jordan. Jordan feels guilty toward everything. It will take a lot of strength on his part to get past his guilt and go after Rin-chan (if he ever does). I’ll say it’s unlikely because Jordan likes Jin and his feelings toward Rin-chan is ambiguous at best.
I love the JoRin backstory and the short JezWen scene too. Jezebelle is awesome even with one scene.
After what happen between Bo and Rin-chan, is it too cruel if I make fun of Marissa? I feel sorry for Bo though. I don’t think Rin-chan will ever see him as anything other than a friend. At least, Vance has more hope than that.
Oh and Rin-chan’s father is not as bad as I imagine him to be. I’m sure since there’s been so much build-up to Rin-chan’s father that he’ll get more screen time. The JoRin pregnancy plot device will go into play later on too. Huh. JoRin might happen after all. We’ll see. This story is getting harder to predict. There are too many changing factors go into play with every new chapter. One chapter, KrisRin looks unstoppable. Another chapter, BoRin looks more plausible. Then another, JoRin. It’s so confusing on Rin’s end. At least, it’s easier on the JezJin end. Any rival against Jezebelle has no chance at this point. Tiffany should settle for either Kristian or Bo and forget Jin. Either that or she’s not going to receive a happy ending. Right when I am beginning to like her more too.
Overall, what a chapter. I am speechless at how dramatic it was. Good job as usual Minnie. Good luck with mid-term week.
Comment by Steve — October 19, 2009 @ 3:08 pm
Yes, it would be cruel to Marissa, Steve. Stop giving me more reason to ship you two! And thanks for the good luck thing.
Comment by Minnie — October 19, 2009 @ 7:41 pm
OH SHUT UP STEVIEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
God, this chapter is SOOOO EVILLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!! You’re so EVILLLLLLLLLLLLLL MINNIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!
I can’t decide which pairing I like anymore!!!!!!!!!! -______________-
I love JezJin, JorJin, JorBo, BoRin, JoRin, KrisRin, KrisTiff, KrisJez, BoTiff, and ughhhh so many THREESOMES too!!!!!! I guess the only pairings I still don’t support is TiffJin, JinRin, and VanceRin (just to spite Stevie)….
Though if Rin doesn’t end up with Kristian, who does she end up with…….. so many possibilities except for Jin of course.
Good job Minnieeeeeeeeeeee~~~~~~~ You’re still evil though!!!!!! Relationships are so messed up in GG LOLLLL
Comment by Marissa — October 20, 2009 @ 9:23 pm
I’m glad to say I’ve finally caught up with the story. One interested anime addict, and three days later, I can finally say I’ve caught up with your original story. And I’m glad to see that you write fanfic as well. Forgive me for not using my real name to “Review” but it’s a bad habit of mine =P
Be that as it may, I have to say I LOVE JIN!!!! And with that tad bit of fanboyishness over, I must say that I love all the characters in your world, and you’ve crafted them quite masterfully, but Jin’s my favorite, and I’m in full endorsement of Jin/Jez, with Jin/Jo being my second favorite pairing possibility for the absolutely stunning Geek.
I love how you’ve had all of the characters grow and change and build themselves into new people throughout the course of the entire story, I find that amazing, as most authors sometimes forget to focus so much on character development, even in Dramas. I must say, character building seems to be your strong suit as an author.
There are a few grammatical and syntactical errors, especially in the dialogue, but I prefer to think of the dialogue problems as accents… most of the time. Overall, I think your grammar is decent, and I’ve seen improvement from the first chapter to now, but there are always a few errors in your work, but I must say that don’t detract overly much from the central story.
As for the current chapter…………WOW……… I had a feeling Rin had dug herself a grave with all of this, and it isn’t like either Rin or Kristian have been outstanding partners in the relationship, but I do like them together immensely. I think that this is probably the most stupid thing either of them has ever done, and I hope they fix it, and fix it soon. Not that that seems liable to happen, mind you, but I still hope it will. As ever always, I wish Jin got more screen time, I have every chapter, and will every chapter hence, so that’s not really a critique as much as my being a fanboy. Oh, as for Jordan, I think he’s an emotional little uke that needs………………….ahem…..anyway, he needs help, but I think he’s better than he used to be.
That should be everything. I really like your story, but I have to agree with Marissa that the relationships in GG are extremely perverse, not that I mind, I’ve always been a strong proponent of angst
I’m sorry for such a long first review, but what can I say, I’m making up for so much lost ground.
Oh, and I hope you received my offer…I hope you consider it and I thank you for taking the time to read it =D
Good Job and Good Luck
Comment by Bragi151 — October 24, 2009 @ 7:20 pm